Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Work

is an important part of our lives. No matter where we are or what we do, we cannot escape our

tasks whether

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tasks, whether

in school or at

work

. Some people believe that working in a

group

is more important than working individually. While Others disagree. In my view, I believe that

group

work

is better for two important reasons.

First

, more successful ideas will be collected when working in a

group

. Getting ideas from 4 to 5 persons has a great varying than when we get them from one person.

For instance

, when I was in the high school I was asked for a project and

this

project mainly consists of 5 members. After the 5 members were chosen, I was a little bit frustrated because it was the

first

time to

work

in a

group

and we have to think together for ideas as our

work

is dependently. I took a deep

breathe

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breath, then

breath then

then

told myself that everything will be okay. In our

third

meeting, we

have been collected

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have been collecting

numerous ideas to support our project and

this

mainly was the transition point in my life.

In addition

, the school announced for the results and we got the highest score.

This

experience taught me that it’s very beneficial to

work

with others and it’s so apparent in the results.

Second

, reduction of stress due to working in a

group

. Definitely working with other members will reduce the stress and the huge amount of

work

that any individual will have if he works alone.

For example

, two years ago when I was in grade 10, I was required by only one task within working in a

group

which made me more focus on what I required to finish.

Then

,

everyone

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every one

of the

group

had to give his task to a specify person who collected all the tasks together and put them in one folder to submit it to the teacher.

However

, my friend in another

group

chose to

work

individually without any help. He was very stressed by the deadline and the immense tasks as he asked the teacher to extend his

deadline but

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deadline, but

she told him that

this

extending will decrease his score. Even though

that is

true that working independently has its own advantages and a way of

self-reliance but

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self-reliance, but

in the

result it

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result, it

won’t be as good as working in a

group

unstressed. In sum, though some may refute the idea of working together in a

group but

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group, but

it’s an important and more beneficial way to finish any kind of

work

. Not only it helps in collecting more successful

ideas but

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ideas, but

it

also

reduces the stress during

work

. We should know

the good

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better

effects of working with a team.