ĐỀ 1: In many counties, more and more people are staying at home to look after their children when women work full time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

Recent decades have witnessed an upsurge in the number of women becoming breadwinners in the family while men stay at home for

child care

a service involving care for other people's children

childcare

.

Although

there

is

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are

a majority of

driving forces

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the driving forces

behind the curtain and personally I believe that

this

trend could lead to equally positive and negative consequences On the one hand, it is likely to be that gender equality gives human beings a right to do whatever they want. Which means unlike the dominated -

men

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men's

man's

society

, a female could get involved in

employment workforce

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employment, workforce

, even taking part in political systems to climb the career ladders while men could

also

stay at home to take care of their family as long as their interest and

desire want to do

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desire to want to do

so

On the other hand

, there is no doubt that the phenomenon brings both benefits and drawbacks. In the

first

place,

this

change in the

family’s

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family

structure gives people the chance to develop their talent and pursue their ambition.

For example

, while if it is rarely for women to hold a position in the previous

society

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society, then

then

in

this

sexual equality weaker sex is totally possible for them to run to be a President like Hicliton did, take a prime illustration.

By contrast

, men might

also

work in the cosmetic industry, becoming a hairdresser or a cook. Thereby giving citizens a space to develop their skills and

strengthen helps

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helps strengthen

them to make a living, leading to a fairer and rich

society

. In the

second

place, paying too much attention to the working environment gives female no time for their husband and offsprings so that lack of interaction between family members might increase the rate of divorce, and other health problems related to children

such

as

mental health disorder

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a mental health disorder

, stress, autism,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

In conclusion, equal

society

gives people the right to pursue their interests while it is advisable for them to take advantage of

this

opportunity and balance between

domestic chores

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the domestic chores

and social activities to get a prosperous life.