Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child’s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Parents play an important role in the development of a

child

's

personality

. It is said by some individuals that there are other sources like television and

friends which

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friends, which

impact the

personality

of children. In my perspective, parents, friends and television all are essential in the life of

child

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a child

the child

children

and my viewpoints on these issues will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs. On the one hand, Parents work really hard to shape the

personality

of their

child

and they work in order to fulfil their basic needs like food

,

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,

shelter and clothes. Apart from

this

, children acquire some of the qualities from their parents and

they

of them or themselves

their

polish these qualities and try to make them civilized, cultured and polished.

For instance

, a survey was conducted in the Punjab in 2017 and its result was that seventy percent parents make regular efforts for the betterment of their children.

On the other hand

, some people believe that when children make friends

then

they can share their personal feelings and thoughts with

them which

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them, which

can not

can not

cannot

be shared with their parents and they can express their

emotion

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emotions

freely

.

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.

For example

, when students study in colleges and

school

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school, then

then

they can play with each other which helps them to grow well.

Besides

this

, on television children can watch cartoons, movies which motivates them to grow well. To recapitulate,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would like to write that all these things have their own value in shaping the

personality

of a

child

.