Some people say that supermarkets and manufacturers have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on products they sell. Others believe that it is the consumer’s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging.

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Although
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it is thought by some that big supermarkets and products' producers should be liable to decrease the number of
plastic
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wrapping on various products for sale, other people think that customers ought to
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account
for purchasing the things with less
plastic
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covering. In my opinion, I consider that it is a huge responsibility of product selling
market
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and manufacturers to minimize the packaging over the products for environmental safety. On the one hand, some people believe that products manufacturers and sellers, both should have liability to reduce the packaging over the products to sell and I agree. Product manufacturer companies could reduce the layer of
plastic
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wrapping and
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market
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the market
should sell it without extra covering or loose to minimise
plastic
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landfill.
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, producers could use exceedingly less paper for packaging
instead
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of awful
plastic
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and in
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market
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the market
it could be on display for sale without any wrapping.
For example
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, in supermarkets, some varieties of apples come in
plastic
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packaging, that could be sale loose in paper bags or cardboard packaging that could be easily recycled.
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, consumers buy the products from supermarkets in the original packaging so if the same product will come in less packaging
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then
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than
it will reach to end user with less wrapping.
On the other hand
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, some people think that it is the moral responsibility of buyers to buy the products with less covering. Supermarkets preferably follow the consumer preferences so if the customers buy products with significantly less packaging
then
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the product will be available with less packaging.
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, there are two varieties of oranges available on the shelf and if consumers prefer oranges with less or no wrapping at all
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less packaging oranges will be mostly available in
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market
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the market
.
However
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, not all consumers prefer the loose products or less packaging products,
therefore
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supermarket generally keep all types of products. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I believe that supermarket and manufacturers should take total responsibilities to provide products in considerable less or no
plastic
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packaging to avoid terrible
plastic
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landfill.To tackle
this
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issue, supermarkets should encourage people to buy environmental friendly products by giving offers and reward points.
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