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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

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Nowadays, a wide range, number of students are leaving their countries to get a high quality at colleges and universities around the world. Living in another country for study could be
benefitly
 but
also
 it has some drawbacks.
Although
, I believe that the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages. Perhaps the most important benefits of living abroad
is
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are
 the cultural exchange. It is because when the
student
 goes to study in a multicultural university, he has the opportunity to interact with others students around the world.
For example
, The University of Melbourne is famous to accept students from India, Japan, Brazil etc. When the
student
 attends the class, he
will not learn only
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will not only learn
will learn not only
 about the subject but
also
 about others point of view and respect different cultures. Another key factor is that
this
 day companies are given more value to professionals that have experience abroad.
For instance
, companies will consider professional which have lived in other countries more
qualificated
 and probably
this
 employee could bring positive acknowledgment for the company.
On the other hand
, the disadvantage of studying in another country is the distance from the family and friends. It means that, the
student
 normally will be able to visit his country only once or twice a year and
as a result
, he could feel alone and maybe thinks about to give up the course because he could not stand the distance of friends and family. In conclusion, the cultural exchange along with the valuation of companies about the
student
 which studied abroad are some of more benefits of studying abroad. And
this
 advantage outweighs the drawback
that is
 living in a long distance from parents and others relative. More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cross-cultural understanding
  • Specialized courses
  • Personal growth
  • Financial strain
  • Tuition
  • Cultural differences
  • Isolation
  • Homesickness
  • Educational systems
  • Academic performance
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