Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir, I am writing regarding some luggage I regretfully neglected to take with me following the arrival of flight GE773 from Corfu to London Gatwick at 15:30 on Tuesday 17th June. My designated seat was 64C and my booking reference is AFX19330. The

bag

is a small brown leather handbag with an embroidered design reading “I love Corfu”. Inside the

bag

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you will find some cosmetics, a small diary, a mobile phone and various souvenirs. The phone is only a back-up and the cosmetics are replaceable, but the diary and souvenirs have a great deal of personal value so I would greatly welcome their return. I believe I left the

bag

under my seat in my hurry to get through the airport and did not realise until I got to my hotel. I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible should you locate the

bag

. If you could send it to me by courier service, I would be most grateful. I would be happy to pay for the service. Thank you for your help, I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Michelle Johnson

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic which is expanded on logically, making your letter easier to follow.

task achievement

To improve the task response, consider providing more specific details about the situation to fully develop your explanation and request.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unfortunate incident
Flight details
Distraction
Valuable possessions
Sentimental value
Lost and found procedure
Safe return
Compensation
Assistance
Gratitude
Follow-up

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