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Some scientists believe that in the future computer will be more intellectual than human being. While some see this as a positive development of other worry about negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Fewer analyst trust that
,
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,
it seems that in
future
computer
 will more powerful than individual. While other thinks it is positivity in
world
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the world
 of
technology but
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technology, but
 I other people feel sad that
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 effect on negativity.
This
 essay will cast light on both views. In my
opinion i
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opinion, I
opinion I
 argue the statement that in
future
computer
 will be more important than men. Focusing on the
first
 view, the most important
argument it
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argument, it
 seems that in
future
computer
 will be more informative than individual.
how
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How
 could
be it possible
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it be possible
? Man made computers not
computer
 made persons.
However
,
this
 believe is wrong.
Moreover
,
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,
everything in
computer
 installed by a person.
In addition
 to, due to
computer
 people become lazy. They know through
computer they
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a computer, they
a computer they
the computer they
 can complete their work faster.
For instance
, people who are doing
job
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jobs
 before they do
hard work
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the hard work
 and face difficulties
by
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with
 manual work like maintaining
record
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records
 in registers spend more time in offices. Balancing cash manually now become lazy due to using
computer
. In other side,
computer
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the computer
computers
also
 Impact positive
effact
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
effects
affect
also
. It will never be informative in
future
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the future
. But
computer
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the computer
a computer
 is beneficial in every field of life.
For example
, in
hospitals
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hospital
hospital's
 doctor saved the records of patients as well as time and date of their follow up in
computer
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the computer
computers
 so they can not face difficulties in searching of their records. It
make
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makes
 life easier. In conclusion,
computer
 have some good effect as well as
bad effect
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bad effects
the bad effect
. In my
opinion i
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opinion, I
opinion I
 disagree to that point it will be more beneficial than man.
This
 concept is wrong
bevause
for the reason that; on account of
because
 the invention of
this
 technology introduced by man so man is very
genious
someone who has exceptional intellectual ability and originality
genius
generous
 than his invention.
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