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Completing universities education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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These days, education plays the vital role to live a better standard of living. While some people are of the opinion that getting graduation from the university is the only way to get a better placement in a company, others believe in the experience and skills. In my opinion, even though graduation is the basic requirement for getting a good placement experience and additional skills are definitely needed for the
further
 growth.
To begin
 with, in
this
 modern society, education is the underpinning for everyone to survive in
this
 competitive world.
Therefore
, many companies and organisations are always looking for the university graduated ones to offer a job. As these youngsters are already taught by the institution, about all the basic concept which required to work in their organisation, a small amount of training and counselling is more than enough for them to work.
For instance
, nowadays most companies are conducting campus interviews at universities to offer a job for the fresh graduates, as they are capable to work efficiently.
On the other hand
, training and skills are necessary to shine better in their career. As the universities taught only the basics, additional skills and experience is must for the growth to
next position
Suggestion
the next position
 or getting promotions in career. And
also
, these skills will be the added advantage for the young freshers to compete others.
For instance
, after completing my post graduation, I developed my programming skill by taking a special Diploma course, which help me to compete all the other candidates during my
first
 interview. In conclusion, I strongly believe that university education is the basic criteria to get a good job,
however
, additional soft skills and training is most needed to shine and improve the career growth.
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