Some people think high end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

In
contemporary era
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the contemporary era
, Technology
flourishing
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is flourishing
flourishes
by
laps
a light, self-propelled movement upwards or forwards
leaps
and bounds. People are becoming a workaholic and self-
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
. There are a few members of the community think that, a high standard
automation
can reduce and remove the frequency of
masses
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the masses
, those who committing offence. I totally disagree with
this
notion,
however
, advancement in a
machinary
machines or machine systems collectively
machinery
will make even more theft, as
offender
use
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uses
a technology wisely to
makes
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make
a
crime
.
To begin
with,
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
, human
is give
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has given
is given
gives
much more concern to the
advancemet
encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
advance met
in computerisation.
Therefore
, a major
offender
is now aware of techniques and
use
this
formula to
committing
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commit
a
robery
larceny by threat of violence
robbery
. As, using effective
techniques there
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techniques, there
is very rare chances that they get caught.
For instance
, Toady a many organisations
use
a CCTV cameras, to prevent being theft in their shop,
Although
, criminals are much aware of
this
and they
haev
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
develpoe
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
a software to crack a CCTV.
This
is how person today
use
a
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an
application to
makes
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make
a
robery
United States parliamentary authority and author (in 1876) of Robert's Rules of Order (1837-1923)
Robert
rivalry
rubber
.
Moreover
, through using
effecient
being effective without wasting time or effort or expense
efficient
automation
criminals nowadays hack a lot of websites and hack the significant data and
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
sell it to
somwhere
in or at or to some place
somewhere
else for getting money.
This
is
new way
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a new way
the new way
to getting
crime
with
help
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the help
of technology.
On the other hand
, there are several reasons, that machine assist
hunam
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humanity
human
to prevent a
crime
.
For example
, todays, GPS can be
use
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used
in order to find location of phone.
This
would be help
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would help
to police to find
offender
who robe the phone.
Additionally
, invention of different sorts of software is
help
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helping
in order to maintain
record
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records
of
theft
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the theft
.
This
were be
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was
very difficult in past when
such
advancement were not
avialable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
. To conclude
this
, advancement is useful in many ways to catch
a
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an
offender
and track them easily,
However
, there is a plethora of way in which
automation
assist to a human to make a
robery
larceny by threat of violence
robbery
rubbery
Robert
. So it does not rational to me to say that
automation
can reduce a rate of
crime
.
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