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DEEPIKA SUBBURAJ M.Eng., EIT 275 Trott Drive, London ON | [email protected]| linkedin.com/in/deepikasubburaj06 To, McIntosh Perry Re: Job Application for Project Coordinator, Building Quality Assurance, Woodbridge, ON Dear Sir or Madam, As a professional with a Master’s in Structural Engineering from The University of Western Ontario, Canada. I am confident that I have the technical knowledge, interpersonal
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, and enthusiasm you seek for the position. I believe that I will make a unique contribution to the company by providing a strong technical skill set, vast computational
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, and a global mindset. Through my past
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experience, I enhanced my engineering knowledge and management
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. I worked as an Engineer-in-Training with a multi-disciplinary team of Engineers, Project Managers, and Supervisors. Coordinating with contractors and
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on-site has deepened my understanding of the practical implementation of structural design and my appreciation for other disciplines.
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, I prepared shop drawings with the design department. I was
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in charge of cost estimating, material take-off, site inspection, and implementing quality control programs. My detail-oriented mindset, broad knowledge base, and adaptability allowed me to make many valuable contributions to the company. My kind and inquisitive personality traits have helped me to forge lasting professional relationships and obtain mentorship. In my academic career, I completed projects comprising
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modeling
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, analyzing, and designing high-rise residential and commercial structures made up of concrete, masonry, and wood. Designed and analyzed cable-stayed bridge,
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steel braced frame structure using NBCC 2015, CSA, CISC,
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Building Code. Structural elements
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using performance-based and capacity-based design
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and structures optimized for performance and cost. Technical reports,
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were prepared and presented to colleagues and professors. I am a highly motivated engineer with a passion for learning,
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my
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, and have a strong
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ethic. I have demonstrated commitment and integrity to the job that I am assigned. I am a team player and have the ability to
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independently to meet deadlines, goals, and
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standards with proper time management and attention to detail. I am ready to travel/relocate as per the requirements. I am legally entitled to
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in Canada and have obtained my EIT with Professional Engineers Ontario. I look forward to the opportunity,
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applicant and bring unlimited value to the company. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Deepika Subburaj
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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