Some people say that increasing businesses and cultural contacts between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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It would be argued by some that a growing international
businesses
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business
and cultural exchanges can bring benefits. From my perspective,
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phenomenon can cause the national specialities of many countries to be assimilated. On the one hand, international trade can contribute to boosting the local economy. It is obviously that running businesses in other countries probably promote company’s images and reputations,
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, the information about these enterprises would be disseminated to reach more and more clients.
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would help them boost their sales figures and production and commerce can be promoted.
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means that these firms will dispense thousands of employment opportunities for local people, which can
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help
improve their living standards.
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, a growing cross- culture can help people expand their perspectives and sense of cultural understanding by exposing to new experiences in a multicultural setting.
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, they will learn respect and tolerate other ethnics, which would avoid some culture- related problems
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as tensions or conflicts.
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, I believe that
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trend could create the possible danger of the disappearance of a cultural and traditional values of a nation. Obviously, companies would bring its own culture everywhere it goes,
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, people are more likely to be influenced and acquire a new habit.
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, many of today’s youth seem to prefer Korean songs and Chinese films rather than their traditional songs and dramatics due to the process of
intergration
the action of incorporating a racial or religious group into a community
integration
interrogation
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means that other cultures
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as lifestyles, occident costumes have gradually penetrated into people’s daily life, disregarding various
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times
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honored
having an illustrious reputation; respected
honoured
values, which can cause the loss of traditional cultures. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against developing
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commerce and cultural contacts, but it seems to me that
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trend can be considered as
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an
insurmountable challenge in term of ever- increasing culture.
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