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In many modern societies , grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandchildren. What do you think are the consequences of this ?

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Nowadays, gerunds are suffering from a complete isolation. There are a huge gap between the children and parents
also
 grands. There are a lot of consequences for
this
, we are going to share some of it today might can change something.
Firstly
, Our world become so quick comparing of
last
 century, there are a lot of reasons for it some of it, our lifestyle life becomes so tough and harder than before,
also
 technology effect of us
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 on our new generation which is grandchildren
.
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.
 99% of our children become more addicted of cell phone they are become comparing of
last
 century.
On the other hand
, our grandchildren most of the time feels lonely and sometime they don't know their grandchildren, the cause of that vacuum to appearance. Appearances have a big responsibility to reduce the gap between them shields and the grandfather or mothers.
Also its
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Also, its
 unfair for the grandfather doesn't see their grandchildren, special they old already and they need some happiness which is coming from their kids
Therefore
, we have to change our lifestyle, we have to be more attached with our grands, we can
also
 back like before reducing our technology and feel some joins with our relative, In conclusion, Our grands are a big gift from our god we have to take care of them
such
 like what they did with us before, especially as we know we will get old soon and for sure we will not be happy if
this
 happened with us. So we have to treat them like a gift.
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