New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In
this
era of technology, new gadgets are released nearly every month, particularly online Linking Words
gamin
, where children play with each other on the internet. the act of playing for stakes in the hope of winning (including the payment of a price for a chance to win a prize)
gaming
This
has been a great achievement for Linking Words
human-kind
, all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humankind
however
, I believe the advantages do not outweigh the disadvantages, as there are many worries in respect to the side effects of these devices.
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Firstly
, children nowadays spend most of their free time on smart devices, from studying to playing, all is done Linking Words
on
electronics. Suggestion
with
For example
, on average a child spends 5 hours daily on gaming consoles Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
Playstation
. A study done by Australian University of Medical Sciences in 2019, reported that children with increase screen-time are more Suggestion
the Playstation
likley
to have an early deterioration of eyesight. has a good chance of being the case or of coming about
likely
Eventhough
, technology has made many things feasible, it has Suggestion
Even though
also
raised concerns regarding the addictive Linking Words
affect
, it has on a young mind.
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
On the other hand
, due to the rising spread of diseases Linking Words
such
as Covid-19, parents prefer their child to play inside Linking Words
instead
of being outside. For Linking Words
this
reason, guardians are letting children play on online games, Linking Words
however
, they should be worried about Linking Words
detrimental effects
its having on a child's brain. Suggestion
the detrimental effects
Moreover
, psychologists have reported, that children in the future Linking Words
tend
to Suggestion
will tend
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
ability
to Suggestion
the ability
socilaise
in-person, and stay away from social gatherings.
To conclude, though technology has made life easy and entertaining for kids, it has take part in social activities; interact with others
socialise
socialize
also
introduced many negative effects, it is having on younger children.Linking Words
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