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n some countries, people prefer to rent a house than buy one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a property?

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Buying a house is not a preference in some nation, people would choose renting a place to stay.
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 the compensation of leasing a
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 is that the renter will not be obligated to pay any levy because it is the owner's responsibility, and if there will be any problem like damages of the house, it is the owner who will enforce any action to make their
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 still presentable for the
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 tenant who would like to avail.
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, the drawback of renting is that the renter will spend a lot of money to rent a place, without the benefits of owning the
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. Aside from that if you want to make any changes in the house, permission is needed from the owner before you can take any actions, and sometimes conflict will arise if the other party will not agree the changes you want to make. The money and time is wasted in renting an accommodation.
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 disadvantages is that a lot a money is spent without the benefits of owning the
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