Nowadays, in many countries chemicals are used to produce and preserve food. Are the advantages of this use overweigh the disadvantages?

It is very common chemicals are used to make and keep
food
in many countries. In
this
essay, I will discuss the drawbacks outweigh the advantages on use
this
chemical
subtances
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substance
substances
to produce
food
. In
manys
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
countries, when factories produce
food
, they use chemicals to keep the
food
state longer.
For example
, we can see the expiry date of
cans which
Accept comma addition
cans, which
is
selling
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sold
in the supermarket are
also
3 to 5 years or above.
This
is because they add some preservative to extend the effective date of the
food
products, and if people take
these
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these foods
food
for a long period, it will be harmful to our
health
.
Moreover
, apples are
also
added some coating of wax to make
its
the thing named or in question
it
feature look like more fresh and make it keep longer.
Therefore
, when we must wash
friuts
the ripened reproductive body of a seed plant
fruits
before we eat them,
otherwise
, it will be causing harm to our
health
.
Additionally
, many
food
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foods
are added
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have added
add
some artificial colour to make them more
colorful
having striking color
colourful
and seem delicious than before,
such
as
candys
a rich sweet made of flavored sugar and often combined with fruit or nuts
candies
candy
and
stawberry
sweet fleshy red fruit
strawberry
jams. The evidence is a factory which is
produce
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producing
stawberry
sweet fleshy red fruit
strawberry
jams, but it is said that residents who live there, they have never seen real
stawberry
sweet fleshy red fruit
strawberry
transports into the factory.
In other words
,
it
it is
it's
made by many
chemicals
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chemical
substances and artificial colours and
this
is
damage
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damaging
our
health
if we eat
these
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these foods
food
for a long time. In conclusion,
although
many foods need to extend their effective day by adding some
chemicial
relating to or used in chemistry
chemical
ingredent
a component of a mixture or compound
ingredients
ingredient
.
However
, I strongly believe that the disadvantages
is
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are
more than the advantages, it is because if people take these
food
product
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products
for a long period, it will be
damage
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damaging
our
health
.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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