It is suggested that young people should undertake a period of unpaid work to help people in the community. Does it bring more benefits of drawbacks to the community and young people?

In

this

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fast paced, competitive

world there

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world, there

is no time left for people to

work

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for social betterment. Keeping

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in mind, some are of the opinion that the younger generation should take up a break from a paid job and

work

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to give back the

society

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. In my

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opinion, there

are more pros

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cons to

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, today's youth has easy access to materialistic things that may spoil them, due to which they may not understand the basic struggle of life and lack empathy. The process of working

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in

the community for free will make them understand the value of money and

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make them realise what the under-

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are going through.

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, a lot of multinational companies are now onboarding new entrants who have worked for the welfare of the

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.

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, Unilever just hired a batch of interns who had

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spent

one year of their time teaching young kids from the slums.

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Dharavi

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exercise is largely going to benefit them, there are indeed a few shortcomings. For starters, some youngsters who do not come from rich backgrounds may find it

diffiult

not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure

difficult

to survive without pay. While social welfare may be their passion they may not able to

persue

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

pursue

it due to economic pressure. The government needs to help

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kids so they come forward and fulfil their dream of helping the community.

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, in Singapore the government gives paid leave to the young opt to go to the

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world countries in Asia and

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work

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with the communities there. In conclusion, some believe that youngsters should take some time off to

work

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built

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building

a

commnity

a group of people living in a particular local area

community

around them, while a large section of the

society

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think

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thinks

its a great idea, others do not think so. I think the idea of taking a break to

work

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for the betterment of the

society

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has more pros

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

cons

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