Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and discuss your opinion.

It is the

education

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which makes a person civilized,

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cultured and polished and some individuals believe that it can be achieved by the guidance of a skilled

teacher

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while others believe that it

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can be derived by the

the

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right frame of mind.

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In my perspective,

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an

experienced instructor and correct attitude both are essential for better

education

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. On the one hand, It is well said that school is a temple and a

teacher

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plays the role of

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a priest

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but that tutor should be efficient,

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honest and hardworking in order to uplift the level of

education

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For instance, one of my

friend

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friends

had

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an

interest in Economics,

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but

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she did not get trained

teacher

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as a result

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she could not

succed

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succeed

in the examination.

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She

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had changed the

teacher

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and she had found an excellent

teacher

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who guided her and gave her advice on career and its result was that she

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secured

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the

highest marks in

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the class.

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Overall, it is

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true that

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the

growth and development of any educational institute

is

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are

depended on

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the

skilled

teacher

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.

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, Some of the students are very

mischieveous

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mischievous

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and they do not pay attention

towards

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studies and create disturbance in the classroom

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and they can not blame their teachers for failure in the examination.

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To illustrate

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a general survey was conducted in all the

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countries

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and it

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had concluded that teachers views were that

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only

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a

few students are serious for studies,

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others are involved in stealing

,

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pronography

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pornography

and drug addiction. To recapitulate,

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I would like to write that students should make efforts for getting

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a

better

education

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,

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and teachers should

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work on different

trainings

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pieces of training

and updating their knowledge for the

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development of a successful

education

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system.