Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of folks who like to keep themselves updated about current affairs by the means of
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the
internet has been widely witnessed, nowadays.
However
, some believe that journals will stay as the most significant means of providing news.
Icompletely
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I completely
disagree
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disagrees
with the above assertion and will discuss the possible reasons
further
in
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essay.
First
of all, the predominant reason
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for readers to switch over from print media to cyberspace is its cost-effectiveness and exclusiveness. In modern society, in order to achieve economical stability, people like to spend less and save more, where it is possible. By the use of various news applications on mobile users tend not to spend extra money on newspapers rather pay for internet subscription, which in fact costs less than
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the
a
monthly payment of newspaper subscription.
Moreover
, everyone likes to keep himself updated about different reports from throughout the world as well as weather, depending upon their interest, and by using technology they get real-time information in few seconds with a press of a finger.
Thus
,
this
approach enables them to save money and time.
Further
, another possible reason for
this
trend is awareness about environmental issues. Given the fact that logging is done in enormous number to produce paper, which results in soil erosion as well as flooding. People who are concerned about these man-made disasters have taken a very practical approach to
avoid
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this
. Admittedly, the familiarisation with modern technological tools
such
as mobile phones and computers will happen at its own pace and
as a result
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,
there would be many in numbers who will rely on traditional methods to consume news. The change has been widely noticed,
however
. To conclude,
although
for some people newspapers will play an important role, I personally believe the number of people who will avail
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the
use of
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internet for news applications will increase in the foreseeable future
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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