There is a significant gap between rich and poor countries. Some people think that richer countries should be responsible for supporting poorer countries while others think it is the responsibility of the poorer countries. What is your opinion?

In the era of globalisation, there are several countries that have the strongest

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, while, others are competing to become a developed

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. There are few masses think that

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developed countries should be accountable for assisting backward nations.

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view is supported by some, others have a strong counter-argument, that, backward countries manage their finances themselves. In my opinion, those

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who are financially strong would help the developing countries in order to take a stand in

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competitive era.

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with, Due to the

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of national income backward countries rise more financial burden,

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, poverty rate increase at an alarming rate. To tackle

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problem, some people think that, it would be better if

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lower

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would be funded by those strong nations.

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would help

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that

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to grow at a significant rate.

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, USA considered to be the strongest

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world, as

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year the USA provides $10 million US to Africa according to the source by Bloomberg,

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initiative would be a great impact on those poor nations to grow rapidly.

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, a few members think that

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, poor

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would have to manage their finance wisely, If they manage their money rationally, It is able to boost their standard of living,

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, it will automatically reduce poverty.

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ountry should allocate their budget according to the requirement of the sector,

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, they should be more focus on

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mperative area

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as education and healthcare, which lead to boost the overall standard of their population. Apart from

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countries need to create more job opportunities,

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lead to more and more people engaged into a workplace, eventually, productivity increase, which is most crucial aspects of any nations to grow independently. To conclude

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, after musing both sides of the arguments, it can be said that, nations should allocate their resource wisely to achieve success.

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well-developed nations should help to backward

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as they

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responsible for the growth of some poor nations.