Your parents will be celebrating their 50th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. But you have a friend who can help.

Dear Julia, Hope you are doing excellent. I am writing
this
letter because I need some advice from a professional event planner like you. And I need it because my parents are going to celebrate their 50th wedding anniversary soon, and I just don’t have a clue about how to make
this
occasion a memorable one. By the way,
this
50th anniversary is going to be a special occasion for my parents because they have been through a lot of ups and downs in their 50 years of married life, and yet their love for each other seems to be as fresh and deep as the day when they got married. Of course, I have plans to buy them some perfect gifts and creating a slideshow full of their memories, but I am not too sure if that’s what will go with the appeal of
such
a grand occasion.
Besides
, I am still undecided where to organise the event, how to decorate the venue and whom to invite. So, please meet me day after tomorrow at around 5:30 pm at your office so that I can discuss my plans with you while
also
borrowing some of your expert ideas to turn
this
grand event into a successful one. Best wishes, Linda May
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