as countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. what are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society

The development of the countries
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part of the population prefer to live
individualy
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individually
or in small family units.
Tradicionaly
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Traditionally
, we were used to
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big families living in large houses for years, but
this
had
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unpopular recently.
This
trend may have some effects on society, whether they are good or bad is a debatable question, but we certainly can understand some of its causes.
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essay will point out some aspects of
this
increasing change, and end with a short conclusion of the current scenario.
Altough
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Although
many people like to live near their family, some opportunities are unavailable in their cities, which may lead some individuals to want to change to another place, so they can achieve their goals. There are many examples to support
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opinion,
such
as the search for
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university, for a better job opportunity or even a desire to live in a specific place. Thereby those individuals end up being
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separated
from their families for long periods or sometimes for the rest
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their
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lives
life
lifes
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.
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this
is not exactly a negative effect. Being alone or just far from your family could be a bad thing for you, but meanwhile, you are achieving your goals and pursuing the things you find important to your life.
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,
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are not required to take
this
step in most cases, but simply having
this
chance available in your life is already a great deal. In conclusion, despite the fact that most families are less united than before, many of their members are chasing their dreams, which is
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great for most of them.
Besides
we even have the chance to have our family closer to us using modern technology, that may not be perfect, but at least is an amazing way to keep
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communication
at long distances.
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  • migration
  • limited living space
  • economic independence
  • nuclear families
  • social norms
  • isolation
  • mental health issues
  • real estate market
  • housing shortages
  • social care
  • extended family networks
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