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Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development?

#schools #food #drinks #students #lunch #breaks #development
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hese days have started a new business by introducing
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the concept of
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anteen which offers
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junk
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during
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 and attracts more and more students. In my opinion
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his is a negative development which can lead to
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serious health issues
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 as obesity and create an impact on the overall eating habits of the children. One of the major issue related to eating
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in the
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 canteen that
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food
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stuffs
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 containing
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lot of oil and fat which affects the physic of the students and
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they become overweight at a very tender age which in turn
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leads to increase in the level of cholesterol in their
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body and
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of
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eart attack.
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hildren are
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likely to feel restless during the
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 hours which reduces the concentration level
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and
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 impacting their overall performance.
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, cold drinks that
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are quite common among the children these days and has become a style quotient contains
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xcessive level of sugar which when consumed almost every day causes serious problems
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 as diabetes etc.
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hese drinks
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bones present in
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the body as they tend to soften them over a period of time. Another issue is that due to regular consumption of unhealthy
food
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 offered at
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 premises impacts the overall eating habits of the children, and
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 they avoid eating healthy
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 even at home and keep on skipping their meals which leads to deterioration in their health and invites
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ot of issues
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. In
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arents become helpless as their children
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 not want to eat
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 prepared at home as they find it tasteless and at the end
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parents
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are forced to make
food
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 which may not be healthy
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at all but they don't have any option
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have to listen to their children. In conclusion, it is the duty of the
school
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 to create awareness among the children so that they can
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avoid consumption of unhealthy
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 and eat a balanced diet
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only
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if these institutions stop making money at the cost of the health of the children.
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