In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in in the field of information technology, for example the world wide web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extend do you agree with this view?

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is increasing rapidly. Some people think increasing of IT

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has too many negative effects, but I disagree about that view. There are some positive effects consequences of developments in

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, it is fast and easy to contact with family and friends even they live far. when I live in Canada, I could keep in touch with my friends and called with my family frequently through skype or facetime. The time zone is totally different between

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wo countries.

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, these days

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nternet is faster than before and most of

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lace

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wi-fi. So I did not need to send a mail or make

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international phone call.

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, people who want to learn something can get

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ducation at home.

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ew years ago, if someone wanted to learn something, example, play

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guitar, she/he had to go to guitar class and it

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, providing that people have a computer and Internet, they can learn everything on Youtube with

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ree charge on anywhere and anytime. In

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, unless

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developed, students have to go to school for classes even outbreak like COVID-19.

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, developed

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will save people's life. Current

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skill can make people's parts and some organs by 3D printers.

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, many people who going to die with illness could get one more opportunity

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life in the close future. It still

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to more study about medical information

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and 3D printers. I think

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will be the best benefit of IT developments. In conclusion, I disagree that increasing

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more negative effects than positive. I believe on condition that people use information

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rightly, it will bring more benefit to people.