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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter Describe the item Explain where and when you left it. Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you’re doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to inquire about my lost laptop. It is a black
of
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colour HP desktop computer with
15.7
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a 15.7
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 mm screen size. It is in an old black leather bag with
green
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a green
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 colour horse sticker on the top cover. I forgot my laptop
in
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northbound
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the northbound
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 subway train yesterday morning at 10 A.M, in coach number 5 and sheet number 75. I had my minicomputer underneath my sheet. I left
train
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the train
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12:15
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at 12,15
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 P.M and forgot to pick up my workstation. I would like the company to take
an
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 action on
this
 issue as soon as possible. If you find my laptop please contact me on
this
 number 647 667 2930 between 9:00 A.M- 2:00 P.M or leave me a message. So for the
next
 step I will be that I come and pick my minicomputer. I look forward to receiving a positive and prompt response from you at the earliest. Thanking you in anticipation that my concerns will be looked into at the earliest. Yours sincerely, Virpal Kaur
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In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable
  • distinguishing features
  • route
  • carriage
  • seat number
  • lost and found department
  • appropriate steps
  • contact information
  • swift and positive action
  • item of value
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