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You have a problem with a neighbour. Describe the problem. Say how long it has been a problem. Explain what action you want your neighbour should take

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Dear Henry, I am writing
this
 letter to discuss a persisting problem I have been facing owing to your
car
 parking habits. Yesterday I noticed your
car
 right parked right in front of my home's main door. I have come to realise that
this
 is not a
one off
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 incident and, in fact, has been the case for a month now.
In addition
, your
car
 was parked in a way that prevented more than one person from entering at the same time. Not only does
this
 make it difficult for anyone to enter, but
also
 makes exiting the home considerably problematic. The person impacted the most by
this
 persisting problem is my mother who, as you already know, requires an electronic wheelchair for mobility. While there are several other locations to park your
car
, I see far greater value in seeking a permanent solution.
Therefore
, I urge you to build a garage for yourself.
Although
 I believe
its
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 your responsibility to finance a garage, I will be happy to meet you half-way. Typically
constucting
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constructing
 a garage takes close to a week.
Nevertheless
, I will allow you a month to bring
this
 issue to closure.
This
 is, most
definately
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definitely
, in the best of both our interests. Regards, Sanket
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