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Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However, many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?

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Regular and enough
exercise
 should be taken by
eldery
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elderly
 people and doctors recommend it, but they do not take it. There are some reasons and some ways to solve the problems. Human beings feel difficulty moving when they get older, and some exercises are too hard for them. The body sanctions of
eldry
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elderly
 are getting lower naturally and it makes people hard to
move
. In fact
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people have to
move
 or
exercise
 to grow their body function up but if it is difficult to
move
 body people give up easily, and a bad cycle has begun.
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, even if they have
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ery strong will, some exercises are too hard for them. Some trainers recommend them to swim or light run but those things are not fit for all. I have some ideas of solutions to support their
exercise
.
First
, the communities for older people
exercise
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one of the big solutions. My grandmother was a member of the ladies walking group, she walked regularly with her friends and trainers until she felt hard to walk, I think because of
this
 she was very healthy for a long time.
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, caregivers or family members should encourage and help them to do.
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, the instructors or trainers could create
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ew
exercise
, which is easy and fun for them. In conclusion, people are getting hard to
move
,
that is
 the reason why older people hard to follow doctors recommendations, and there are many ways to help and encourage them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • motivation
  • physical limitations
  • lack of time
  • fear of injury
  • exercise facilities
  • misunderstanding
  • benefits of exercise
  • social support
  • poor health conditions
  • awareness
  • appropriate exercises
  • guidance
  • financial constraints
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