Some people would say that parents should pay their children for small home duties (cleaning, washing dishes). Other would disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There
two
different approaches to the upbringing of Add a missing verb
are two
children
. On one side are those who believe that children
should be paid for doing domestic chores, while
others disagree. In this
essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and then
give my own opinion on the matter.
On the one hand, the idea to give
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of giving
money
to youngsters might look appealing because it would encourage children
to clean and do house duties. As well as
this
, they would earn their own pocket money
and learn an important lesson of
the value of labour. Change preposition
about
For instance
, my younger brother hates to clean up his own room, and at the same time, he always needs some extra money
to spend on cinema, food courts, etc. In this
kind of cases
, earning Fix the agreement mistake
case
money
for house chores would be an extra stimulation to do it.
However
, it is possible to make the opposite case. This
is because many parents would argue that paying children
for small tasks such
as washing dishes leads to spoiling the youth. This
way they might start to act as if parents have to give them money
for good behaviour otherwise
they can do whatever they want. Meanwhile, the main task of upbringing is to bring up responsible, diligent, and tidy people. They should not wait for an award for just regular daily tasks such
as cleaning the floor or washing their own things.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their own merits, on balance, however
, I think that parents should give pocket money
to the youngsters but not as a payment for the household chores.Submitted by mariya.vlassova on
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task response
Ensure that each body paragraph clearly supports the opinion given in the introduction. Make sure to fully address both views and conclude with a strong opinion.
coherence and cohesion
The essay is well-organized and cohesive with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use transition words to improve the coherence between ideas and paragraphs.