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Some people believe that if an individual behaves in an anti-social manner, such as committing a crime, then society is to blame. What are the causes of anti-social behaviour? Who do you think is responsible?

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Why do criminals commit
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rime has been an ongoing discussion in the
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society
 should work together to deter them. There are 2 primary factors impacting how we behave, which are our genetic information and socio-economic background. Some of our behaviour
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 determined by genes.
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 Yale University studied separated identical twins into different families and studied how they affect their growth. It is obvious that some people behaviours are inborn and have a higher tendency to commit to violence.
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 what we are in adulthood as we learn from people around us a lot.
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, People growing in a dysfunctional family are more likely to have deviate behaviours. The
society
 as a whole is responsible for anti-social behaviours. Even though some criminal behaviours are inheritable, some could
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 be socially-constructed and could be avoided if given enough support. So, we should make efforts helping these people to overcome their natural instincts. The authority should give more support,
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isadvantaged environment. Parents could benefit on how to better bring up their pupils while our younger generations could enjoy better education and living environment. Apart from these, the government should put more emphasis on rehabilitation on prisoners. The out-of-date way of punishing them would only make them vulnerable when they are released back to the outside world. It is vital to encourage them to behave well and actively helping them to
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society
. Overall, our family background and DNA are 2 determining factors on anti-social acts. The
society
 is responsible for the existence of criminals and we should give enough care to help them correct their behaviours and mindsets.
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