Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Since the dawn of civilization, man has wondered if we are alone in the universe, and

such

has led to

space

exploration. It is argued that the funds used in creating and producing the technology for

space

expedition

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not justifiable and that, there are more useful ways of spending

this

money. I completely agree that

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it can be used for more meaningful things of more value to humanity and will explain why.

Firstly

, the earth we live in

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has many needs other than the search for

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ew home or alien life. A key beneficial way of spending

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money

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is to use it in the maintenance of our dear

planet

.

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means that

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we can reduce harmful activities that increase our carbon

footprint

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like processing of wood with big

machineries

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and industrial power plants etc, and turn to greener initiatives

such

as riding bicycles to work

instead

of driving a car and encouraging afforestation. These help to create the awareness of the dangers we are facing in

this

deteriorating

planet

, earth.

Although

these agendas seem simple to implement, they are quite expensive and need funding. Some countries in Europe

for example

, have already started

this

and are spreading their policies

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their nations to reduce these harmful actions to the environment, and are spending a lot of money on

this

too.

However

, they have

also

started encouraging other countries to join the program.

This

will make the world better in the long run if the

space

allocated budget can be used to save the environment.

Secondly

, because the

planet

is currently dying, according to many scientific research journals, many animals have become endangered too. Another profitable way to manage the funds for

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pace project

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is to protect endangered species by putting

out laws

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that will restrict the direct or indirect dangerous habits of people.

For example

, sea turtles are suffocated daily by waste products and these are a cause by human activities,

such

as littering the ocean with plastic bags. Money should be spent cleaning the wastes and their debris

instead

of flying to

space

, expecting to find the unknown.

This

will create a beautiful

planet

worthy of living in the future. In conclusion, it is, in fact, true that the

space

program is exciting and promising, and is in every young adult's dream. Even though the success of many

space

travels have been reported,

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am convinced that the financial commodities that have been set aside for the

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should be utilised on more beneficial needs of human beings

such

saving the

planet

and protecting endangered animals.