Because of falling birth rates adn better health care, the world's population is getting steadily older and this trend is going to cause serious problems for society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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endency of falling birth rate could be seen in many countries excpetialy in industrialized. That happens for a
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of reasons,
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igh cost of child
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or some couples do not have enough time for children up brining. As
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result of
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the world's population is
conctantly
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constantly
adeing
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adding
ageing
,
creting
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creating
a new
chalenges
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challenges
challenge
for the society and the
government
.
Firstly
, as the birth rate decrease and the number of young people who are able to work
also
decline the
government
get less tax than it is needed.
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Thus
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, the
government
may increase the
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taxation
or change its
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budgetary
policy by cutting funding of
differnt
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different
spheres. At the same time, ageing of the world's population boost development of health
care
and other services which is necessary for older people.
For example
, the
government
usually spend more money on income
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support
and medical
care
.
Secondly
, better health
care
leads to a longer life span. That might create some problems for young people. To say that, an old
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specialist
, who could be retired,
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and do not allow younger people to get
this
job.
Moreover
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oung generation
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usually
takes
care
of older family members.
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Furthermore
, if governmental funding for
educaion
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education
is cut in order to
supsidize
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subsidize
health
care
service, those who want to study in the universities do not have enough or have no
finantial
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financial
support. In
this
way, young people spend a lot of time working that affect their education. To conclude, I agree that ageing of the world's population has crucial
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consequences
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society.
However
, it helps to develop social services and quality of life.
In addition
, older employers could share their working experience and teach young people.
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