Because of falling birth rates adn better health care, the world's population is getting steadily older and this trend is going to cause serious problems for society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,

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endency of falling birth rate could be seen in many countries excpetialy in industrialized. That happens for a

nimber

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of reasons,

for example

,

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igh cost of child

care

or some couples do not have enough time for children up brining. As

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result of

this

trend

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the world's population is

conctantly

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constantly

adeing

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adding

ageing

,

creting

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creating

a new

chalenges

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challenges

challenge

for the society and the

government

.

Firstly

, as the birth rate decrease and the number of young people who are able to work

also

decline the

government

get less tax than it is needed.

Thuth

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Thus

Truth

, the

government

may increase the

taxetion

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taxation

or change its

bugetery

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budgetary

policy by cutting funding of

differnt

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different

spheres. At the same time, ageing of the world's population boost development of health

care

and other services which is necessary for older people.

For example

, the

government

usually spend more money on income

suppport

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support

and medical

care

.

Secondly

, better health

care

leads to a longer life span. That might create some problems for young people. To say that, an old

spetialist

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specialist

, who could be retired,

are still work

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and do not allow younger people to get

this

job.

Moreover

,

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oung generation

usualy

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usually

takes

care

of older family members.

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Furthermore

, if governmental funding for

educaion

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education

is cut in order to

supsidize

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subsidize

health

care

service, those who want to study in the universities do not have enough or have no

finantial

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financial

support. In

this

way, young people spend a lot of time working that affect their education. To conclude, I agree that ageing of the world's population has crucial

concequences

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consequences

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society.

However

, it helps to develop social services and quality of life.

In addition

, older employers could share their working experience and teach young people.