Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Friends
makes
Change the verb form
make
show examples
the
life
of people enjoyable because with friends we can share our feelings and thoughts which can not be shared with anyone.It is said by some individuals that they should make friends who have similar views,while others believe that
its
Replace the word
it's
it is
show examples
better to make friends with dissimilar opinions.In my perspective,
its
Replace the word
it's
it is
show examples
better to make friends who have different thoughts. On the one hand, if we make friends with similar thoughts,
then
our
life
becomes smooth and happy because they get common topics for discussions and they can communicate effectively.
For instance
,
last
year
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
had made a friend named Amandeep and it was easy for me to talk with her because her,choices and preferences were familiar with me,so it was really enjoyable whenever
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
spend time with her.
On the other hand
, if we meet with
frienfs
Correct your spelling
friends
who have diverse thoughts ,
then
they can positively impact our
life
Replace the word
lives
show examples
because
sometime
Replace the word
sometimes
show examples
their viewpoints can influence our
life
Replace the word
lives
show examples
because they can give some views which can change our
life
.
Submitted by raman on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
What to do next:
Look at other essays: