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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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 the
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 of people enjoyable because with friends we can share our feelings and thoughts which can not be shared with anyone.It is said by some individuals that they should make friends who have similar views,while others believe that
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 better to make friends with dissimilar opinions.In my perspective,
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 better to make friends who have different thoughts. On the one hand, if we make friends with similar thoughts,
then
 our
life
 becomes smooth and happy because they get common topics for discussions and they can communicate effectively.
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 year
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 had made a friend named Amandeep and it was easy for me to talk with her because her,choices and preferences were familiar with me,so it was really enjoyable whenever
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 spend time with her.
On the other hand
, if we meet with
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friends
 who have diverse thoughts ,
then
 they can positively impact our
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 because
sometime
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their viewpoints can influence our
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 because they can give some views which can change our
life
.
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  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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