Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, vegetarianism is a hot topic that many people talk about and some people think that a human should stop eating

meat

because it

cause

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important

health

issue. I totally disagree with

this

notion. In

this

essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. There have many disadvantages if people eat too much

meat

.

Firstly

,

meat

contains many saturated fats, so if someone who

consume

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a large amount of

meat

, it causes many

health

problem

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problems

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,

such

as cardiovascular

disease

, stroke and so on.

For example

, it is said that there have many people died from cardiovascular

disease

every year and the main cause

to

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this

disease

is people consume

over dose

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overdose

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of

meat

every day.

In addition

, consuming

meat

over the amount for a long period can cause people

b

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ecome

over weigh

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. The evidence is a

high level

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fat of

meat

can increase the cholesterol in

b

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lood.

As a result

, make us become fat and unhealthy.

On the other hand

, there

also

have some benefits for people

e

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at

meat

.

For instance

,

meat

contain

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the greatest level of protein which can

helps

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us to build up muscle.

Therefore

, people who eat

meat

which

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can gain the energy to do things.

Moreover

, a

balance

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and healthy diet should involve various foods, not just only vegetable or

meat

.

This

can

helps

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us to take in different ingredients to makes the balance food intake. The best example is people should follow the food pyramid to ensure they have a healthy

dietry

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dietary

.

Thus

,

meat

is necessary

in

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our daily

dietry

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dietary

. In

conculsion

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conclusion

,

although

eating

meat

is harmful to our

health

and it

make

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many

health

issue

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issues

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, like cardiovascular

disease

and stroke, etc.

However

, I strongly believe that a

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balanced

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balance

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balanced

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diet should

inculde

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include

meat

, it helps us build the muscle and make

the

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apply

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healthy

dietry

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dietary

by

follow

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following

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the food pyramid.