"Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

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of spending on treating the diseases, it is wise to take care of yourself from various

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well said that taking precaution from various diseases is better than having a cure

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treatment

from the diseases. I completely agree with

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as it wastage of money on spending curing in the hospitals. I will elaborate my views in

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with, due to pollution, unhealthy diet and natural disasters, people are getting

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problems. As human is playing with nature so as the nature in reverse giving them. For

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, the current

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of pandemic almost half of the world population is suffering from virus infection. Most of the countries are spending enough in hospitals to cure them and

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on the research of its vaccine. Apart from

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, spending so much money on COVID testing of every citizen in order to stop the community spread. But there are some people who do not care about the

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guidlines

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announce by the government and at the end suffering from the same. To continue with, it is better

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COVID-19 situation everyone must take

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from

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viral infection.

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paying in hospitals, it is better to stay at home, follow the governments pandemic guidelines, do not go outside

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, maintain the social distancing. By

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it would not only save the money but

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the precious time of people.

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,

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is impacting the business and education, but

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and family

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all of

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saves the

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and wealth of the citizens. To conclude,

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it is better to take care of the body. As it is rightly said, "Healthy mind in a healthy body." So keep

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istance from all these diseases by taking

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healthy diet.