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Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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There are different debates between students learn academic or
music
 and Physical Education. Partners support academic skills, which enhance their competitiveness in future job-seeking. I disapprove
this
 opinion,
this
 essay discusses why
music
 and P.E befit for children too. The advantages of learning
music
 can
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 their temperament. It is beneficial to building an optimistic personality,
therefore
, deepen their love about life and art. Having PE class could， to a large extent，enhance pupils’ health. and could help students to relax their bodies and ease their mind, which learns how to cooperate and cultivate a sense of teamwork. Experts suggest students should do physical exercises at least an hour every day. Having PE or
music
 class，by occupying spare time constructively， makes students contented, with no time for boredom. Education Bureau advocates all-round development of their morality, intelligence, physique, beauty, and
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. There is a saying that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. In conclusion,
Although
 academic skills will help them to get a better job, spend too much time on study harmful for their mental and health. Introducing
music
 and physical class into the school curriculum could，to some extent， assist students in realizing overall development and add spice to their dull routine of everyday life
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