Schools are spending so much time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The educational system

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been focusing its basis on conservative subjects,

for example

, history. That statement concern people who think that more effort should be destinate to teach abilities that could help students to find a job in the future.

This

essay totally disagrees with that statement once the traditional subjects can not only increase the knowledge about

life

but

also

can help to reduce the stress and

pressure

of youngsters.

Firstly

, it is necessary to say that the

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process involves the development of different skills and abilities. Traditional subjects

such

as history, science or philosophy not only increase the culture but

also

lead to a better understanding

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human

life

. That ability can benefit people in the future to deal and manage different situations.

A recent

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research concluded with Canadians has shown that 80 per cent of those who studied traditional subjects in school fell more confident to surpass the obstacles of

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adult

life

.

Secondly

, but

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less important, the students nowadays are facing

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high

pressure

to perform excellent grades and be as competitive as it is possible.

Hence

, those factors are related to the development of mental diseases

such

as anxiety, stress and

also

depression. To maintain the

tradicional

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traditional

subjects in schools,

such

as philosophy,

for instance

, creates the possibility to children

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alleviate

the

pressure

between the study schedule once those subjects are not

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complicated to follow or to attend.

For instance

, one of the most reliable schools in England called New Era, usually intercalates traditional subjects in their programs in order to reduce the

students

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anxiety and stress. To conclude, the necessity of

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focus on traditional or conservative subjects in schools can benefit children in their future

life

events and can

also

aliviate

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alleviate

the

pressure

during their educational process,

therefore

, it must not be changed to implement different subjects.