Schools are spending so much time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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been focusing its basis on conservative subjects,

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, history. That statement concern people who think that more effort should be destinate to teach abilities that could help students to find a job in the future.

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essay totally disagrees with that statement once the traditional subjects can not only increase the knowledge about

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but

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can help to reduce the stress and

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of youngsters.

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, it is necessary to say that the

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process involves the development of different skills and abilities. Traditional subjects

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as history, science or philosophy not only increase the culture but

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lead to a better understanding

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human

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. That ability can benefit people in the future to deal and manage different situations.

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research concluded with Canadians has shown that 80 per cent of those who studied traditional subjects in school fell more confident to surpass the obstacles of

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adult

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.

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, but

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less important, the students nowadays are facing

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to perform excellent grades and be as competitive as it is possible.

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, those factors are related to the development of mental diseases

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as anxiety, stress and

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depression. To maintain the

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traditional

subjects in schools,

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as philosophy,

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, creates the possibility to children

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alleviate

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between the study schedule once those subjects are not

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complicated to follow or to attend.

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, one of the most reliable schools in England called New Era, usually intercalates traditional subjects in their programs in order to reduce the

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anxiety and stress. To conclude, the necessity of

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focus on traditional or conservative subjects in schools can benefit children in their future

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events and can

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aliviate

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alleviate

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during their educational process,

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, it must not be changed to implement different subjects.