Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with, have much more influence on our personality and development, than any experiences we may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence?

Researchers found that the inborn quality we acquired during our childhood stage shapes our

life

rather than the different kinds of

experience

life

teach us on every phase of

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life

's journey.

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about

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both the views and ends with an opinion depending on the facts supporting the two arguments. Focusing on the qualities we gain from

our

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early age depends on the way we raised by parents and the environment.

This

is because the mind of a kid assumes his or her parent as a role model and absorb the patterns of behaviour from them.

For example

,the hobby and the dream job mostly

refelct

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reflect

our mother's choice.

Furthermore

,the psychologists explain children are moulded depending on what positive thoughts we feed on the childhood stage will

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to be their personality for the rest of the

life

.

Therefore

,special attention should be given to

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convention and codes of conduct when the infant starts to listen from his mother.

On the other hand

,

e

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xperience is

also

a very crucial weapon to change the attitude in our

subconcious

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subconscious

mind for a long time.

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is due to many

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circumstance can happen in every phase of

life

which plays a huge

impacts

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on our understanding and judgment on people or other aspects.

For instance

,many prisoners have

dramtically

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dramatically

drastically

changed their lifestyle and become prominent leaders by serving society till the end.

Besides

,the good

experience

nurtures the already gained personality and prosper more in whatever field they are working on.

As a result

,the good

as well as bad events extremely

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influences a person while moving forward so

this

enables him to

adapt

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a different approach against the usual behaviour in dealing problems. In conclusion,the nature of an individual is not permanent that cannot be judged by the factors of the way he or she

grown

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up with.

Hence

,I strongly agree that its the human tendency to alter their mentality and strong beliefs based on the

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life

experience

they come across in each

stages

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of

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life

's journey.