You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Anju, I hope you and your family both are doing great in
this
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critical time. I think I will visit you soon because I am coming
next
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month for business training and I will stay in Bombay for that training session period. Actually, I have to find co-op related business management to pass
this
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course
finally
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and recently I have cleared an interview in the city,Bombay.
Then
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I remember you are
also
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living there so I can visit you and your family as it has been a long time to see you. By the way,I am looking for accommodation and there could not be a better place other than your house. But I have one condition if you will allow me to stay at your home
then
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I will pay for rent and other facilities.
Also
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, advise me what kind of gifts I should bring for your family other than your favourite sweet made
my
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mom. I will see you soon. Warm wishes, Jazzy
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anticipate
  • accommodation
  • arrive/depart
  • duration
  • itinerary
  • gracious hospitality
  • household
  • inconvenience
  • lodging
  • reimburse
  • temporary residence
  • travel arrangements
  • visit
  • warm welcome
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