Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

I tend to confess that many people think that it is always not good to keep animals in closed places,

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in zoos. Other people feel that there are advantages for the animals and humans keeping in zoos. People think that animals get food at right

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by keeping animals in zoos and at the same

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,people can see different animals in one place. The following essay will outline the advantages and disadvantages of captivity. Perhaps, the main reason for animal captivity is, most of the animals in the forest, not getting the food at the right

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. Due to

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,the animals are dying every

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decreasing the wild animal count like tigers, lions and other kinds of animals. At the same

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wild animals like lions and tigers killing the soft animals like deers, due to

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those animals count decreasing drastically. By separating animals based their nature and we can keep one type of animals one place and we can feed them on

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. On the other side, people are hunting animals just for fun sometimes or for meat. Mainly the lions, tigers, elephants and deers count is reducing

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. In all over the world, now there are sperate zoos and animal safaris are formed to protect the animals. On the flip side many people taking advantage of animals like parrots and other birds. They are keeping animals in the artificial nets constructed by humans and harassing the by keeping inside. Due to

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many people opposing to remain animals as slavery. Even animals and birds

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miss nature because they do not have more space for roaming in the zoos. Sometimes they will afraid by seeing many people at a

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with their actions. in my opinion

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remain all animals in place is a good option and

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more advantages. Animals will get food on

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they can be protected by the disease. If they feel sick, immediately we can provide the treatment.