Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations to continue their development. Some people argue that practical aid or advice is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Developing countries need financial
support
or practical assistance to become more Use synonyms
successfull
. Correct your spelling
successful
This
has been always a debate globally. Linking Words
This
essay will analyse both the views, Linking Words
however
in my opinion the decision would be subjective, based on the need of the Linking Words
country
.
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Firstly
, let us discuss Linking Words
about
the importance of the financial need of the countries development. Countries like Indonesia, Taiwan , Thailand and Vietnam predominantly located in Remove the preposition
apply
south east
Asia are rich in manpower resource and fairly intellectual, despite Add a hyphen
south-east
of
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apply
this
strength these countries lack in Linking Words
adequeate
money to boost Correct your spelling
adequate
thier
economy and move their Correct your spelling
their
the
country
in a fast phased development path. Use synonyms
Laterly
, Vietnam is one of the developing Correct your spelling
Lately
Later
Latterly
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country
to be mentioned, considering their geographical advantage Change to a plural noun
countries
this
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country
could be an alternate market for China but, purely lacking in financial Use synonyms
support
. So, International organisations especially in Use synonyms
a
uto industry Add an article
the
such
as General Motors, Ford , Chrysler could invest in these countries which will Linking Words
support
their Use synonyms
country
development by creating employment opportunities.
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On the contrary
, countries located in Linking Words
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iddle east is known for their wealth. Almost all developed countries globally Add an article
the
has
a financial stake in these countries make them Change the verb form
have
more
richer. Change the word
apply
However
, it is Linking Words
also
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a
undeniable fact that these countries are lagging intellectually, these countries are sourcing Change the article
an
intellectuall
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intellectual
support
from other countries Use synonyms
such
as for education, medicine and construction. It is evident that these countries clearly require Linking Words
a
practical assistance in major fields for the Remove the article
apply
countrie's
success.
To conclude, apart from the debate of financial Correct your spelling
country's
countries
support
or practical assistance for a Use synonyms
country
it is highly significant to understand the need of the Use synonyms
country
to become more Use synonyms
sucessful
and take Correct your spelling
successful
thier
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their
the
country
in a developmental path.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite