Some people say that there is no need to give international aid by governments as they already have unemployment and homeless in their own country. How far do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

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that these nations have a lot of other problems in their place that need to be looked after before helping others. I firmly support
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viewpoint because taxpayers money should benefit
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them,
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this
argument is that the rich nations collect tax from their citizens to provide the best possible facilities to them when they require.
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for the poor
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advancement. Eventually, they lack sufficient amount to make necessary changes in their own country, which may result in public unrest.
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, failure to provide
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medical facilities, even after paying a huge amount of taxes would create
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animosity among citizens. Apart from
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, in many
under - developed
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countries are financially tarnished only because of
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leaders, which may not be
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by helping
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aid would consider only a short term
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point is needed to consider here is that the affected society may show dependency towards the riches as they are not taught how to tackle their issues effectively.
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countries have never come out from their poverty, even after they have been supported.
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how far these
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are not
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. In conclusion, even though giving aid to the economically backward sections of the world is a good thing, some are
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aginst
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this
and I
also
hold the same view since I could not find
this
help is useful to bring down poverty all over the world.
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