Some people say that there is no need to give international aid by governments as they already have unemployment and homeless in their own country. How far do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
Providing financial support between countries is common these days. how far these
However
, opponents of this
aid argues
that these nations have a lot of other problems in their place that need to be looked after before helping others. I firmly support Change the verb form
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this
viewpoint because taxpayers money should benefit for
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instead
of spending for others.
One of the main reasons to
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for
this
argument is that the rich nations collect tax from their citizens to provide the best possible facilities to them when they require. On the contrary
, this
fund, some times,channelises
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nations’s
advancement. Eventually, they lack sufficient amount to make necessary changes in their own country, which may result in public unrest. Remove the s
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For example
, failure to provide high quality
medical facilities, even after paying a huge amount of taxes would create Add a hyphen
high-quality
an
animosity among citizens.
Apart from Remove the article
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this
, in many under - developed
countries are financially tarnished only because of Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
currupted
leaders, which may not be Correct your spelling
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by helping Correct your spelling
resolved
finacially
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financially
This
aid would consider only a short term assisstance
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assistance
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, other
point is needed to consider here is that the affected society may show dependency towards the riches as they are not taught how to tackle their issues effectively. Change the wording
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, some poor Aftrican
countries have never come out from their poverty, even after they have been supported. Correct your spelling
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In conclusion, even though giving aid to the economically backward sections of the world is a good thing, some are Correct your spelling
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against
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and I also
hold the same view since I could not find this
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