You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

#job #course #teachers #situation #time #action

Dear Mr.

peter

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Peter

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, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about

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not

to attend

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attending

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a part-time evening course. I am one of the students who is taking evening classes and side by side

also

have a full-time

job

. Since my

job

timing has been changed from morning to evening time that's why it's very hard for me to continue my course.

This

job

is really important for me to support my family. In

this

situation, I request you to refund my half of the fees so that I could spend on some valuable resources as I am one who has all the responsibilities to run my home.

This

job

I found after so many efforts so, I could not leave

this

job

in any type of condition. So, kindly try to understand

this

situation and help me in my difficult time to refund me some amount back in my credit card. I hope you understand my problem and my request would be solved. I would

also

happy

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to hear back from you. Yours Sincerely, Anu Bala

Submitted by Anu on Mon Sep 14 2020

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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