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An increased number of people today change their career in their lives. Is it positive or negative development?

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There is no doubt that, nowadays, many professionals change their jobs frequently.
This
 trend can have both personal and career growth retardation
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 multiple levels. In my opinion, I firmly believe that even though some positives can be seen with
this
, the negatives are paramount. One of the main reasons why I think
this
 scenario could lead lack of personal relationship is that by moving from
job
 to another the employee hardly
get
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 an opportunity to meet and communicate with others in their
work place
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. As a human, being a social animal, the emotional connection is highly significant to live
narmally
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normally
.
For example
,
In
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a recent study says that those who jump from more than two
job
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 in
an
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 year shows that he has some stability issues in his personal life. Alternatively, some think that if
work
 more than one
job
 would give many skills, but in reality
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they may not able to excel anything.
Therefore
, it is clearly understood that
this
 habit can negative impacts. Apart from the above- mentioned argument, another side effect is that impairment of career graph.
This
 is because when a person
fail
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 to stick on one
work
 for a long time, he may consider as an unreliable employee and hardly get a trusted position in his
work
 site.
Additionally
, lack of
expirence
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experience
 would prevent him from getting promotions and other incentives.
For instance
, if an actor who changed his profession to teaching , his previous acting expertise never counted here and he wound consider as a fresher here.
Thus
, it is highly recommended that to stay on the favourite
job
 and get expertise in that and grow
further
. In conclusion,
regarding
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shifting
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jobs can be seen as a beneficial act by some. In my opinion
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its
demertis
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demerits
 outweigh by its any merits.
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