The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES THE PATTERN OF A

WAVE

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ENERGY MACHINE AND THE COMPARISON OF A LOW

INSTALLATION

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AND

HIGH

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A HIGH

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INSTALLATION

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WHEREAS

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THE LOCATION IS OPTIONAL.

THIS

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DIAGRAM IS SHOWING THAT IT IS STARTED FROM

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WAVE

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THE WAVE

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DIRECTION AND ENDS UP WITH THE ELECTRICITY GENERATOR.

THIS

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WAVE

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MACHINE HAS A WATER LEVEL WHICH HAS TWO CHAMBER IN WHICH THE AIR FLOW GOES UP

THEN

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PASS TO A TURBINE ONCE

PASSE

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PASSED

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TO THE TURBINE IT WILL GO BACK AND

THEN

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PASSES TO THE OTHER CHAMBER GOING DOWN AND BACK TO THE WATER LEVEL.

THIS

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WAVE

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ENERGY

MACHINES

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MACHINE

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HAS A LOCATION OPTION AND THERE IS A COMPARISON

FROM

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THE LOW

INSTALLATION

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COST

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AND THE HIGH

INSTALLATION

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COST

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T WILL BE STARTED TO LOW

INSTALLATION

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COST

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IN WHICH A LOW OUTPUT THERE WILL BE

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apply

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SMALL WAVES

HOWEVER

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WHEN IT COMPARES TO HIGH

INSTALLATION

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COST

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THERE WILL BE A HIGH OUTPUT AND LARGE

WAVE

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WILL BE OBTAINED Task 2 Question

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave, installation, cost with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

155 words

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