The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

In recent days, it is seen that many companies hire

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number

of men and women employees.

Although

there are advantages to

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trend, the ramifications should

also

be taken into account.

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essay will discuss both the pros and cons and indeed show that the benefits of

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overshadow the drawbacks. to embark upon, there are tremendous advantages of employing

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number

of men and women.

To begin

with,

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has led to a feeling of equality and freedom among women folk and have boosted their

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. To elucidate, the work performance of female workers have improved since

this

came into practice.

Moreover

,

this

leads to a healthy environment in the workspace.

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, many surveys have

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that officers where male and female workers are equal in count the environment is friendly.

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,

this

positive change

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built courage in women to compete men at

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workplace.

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there are some drawbacks associated with hiring

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number

of women to that of men.

Firstly

,

this

has caused unemployment among men and many families are suffering the consequences of

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. To exemplify, in many families man are the bread owners, and when family and when they were unemployed the entire family have to suffer.

In addition

,

this

has led to

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decline

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in the

number

of marriages that use to take place in past, as women are busy in building up their careers.

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, a recent study by The Hindu of India has

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that the rate of unmarried women

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increased

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10 % over 3 years.

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these drawbacks and minor and can be ignored. In conclusion, even there are some pitfalls to

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trend of equality,p the benefits eclipse them. In my opinion

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is a great positive development as it has

empower

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women in the

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society.