To achieve personal happiness, the relationships we have with other people (friends, colleagues, family) are more essential than every other thing. Issues like wealth and occupations take the second place. Write to support this claim.
To achieve personal happiness, in the present world,
one
always gravitate back to money
and job titles. However
, this
only provide
short-term relief and Change the verb form
provides
one
still crave
Change the verb form
craves
for
love and Change preposition
apply
care
from friends, family and colleagues. This
essay will outline that relations with closed ones outweigh the hunger for getting rich solely. To prove this
, examples from wealthy single and lonely superstars and the advise
from Replace the word
advice
elderly
based on experience, will be presented.
Correct article usage
the elderly
Firstly
, name and fame are conveyed as
to resolve all life problems. Change preposition
apply
This
is the reason that human's froms
Correct your spelling
from
age
7-10 commence to imagine being rich and thereby, struggle by all means to Fix the agreement mistake
ages
acheive
success. Correct your spelling
achieve
For instance
, 50 years old famous star Jennifer Lolez
lives in a beautiful mansion Correct your spelling
Lopez
on
the Los Angeles mountains on her own and recent interview she disclosed how she misses her parents and siblings Change preposition
in
sicne
she left them 30 years ago to earn Correct your spelling
since
money
. Sadly, once we lose a
contact Remove the article
apply
from
loved ones, it is difficult to retrace the same love. Change preposition
with
Therefore
, money
and fame does
not provide Change the verb form
do
happiness
, Correct article usage
the happiness
care
and affection that humans seek the most.
Secondly
, human life is meant to have both ups and downs. During our low times, family is the utmost strength one
can back up on
, while Correct your spelling
upon
money
merely stays in the bank account. For example
, as elders say, one
should master the art of balancing between life goals and family so that both are fulfilled prior for
mind and later Change preposition
to
one
for soul food. This
clearly indicates hence
, that humans can care
for one
another, money
can not buy family's
love.
Correct article usage
a family's
This
is why youngsters should care
for their parents, friends and loved ones while they can.
To Conclude, one
should learn to balance and earn money
for family's
welfare and Correct article usage
a family's
care
. It is predicted in future
more and more people are turning towards family to feed their Correct article usage
the future
soul
.Fix the agreement mistake
souls
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The Greeting
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- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
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