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The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

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There is no doubt that juvenile delinquency in society has been increasing for many years. It is sometimes thought that
this
 issue can be effectively managed if parents have been educated
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how to do shape a child. In my opinion, I strongly support
this
 viewpoint as they know their children and their characters.
Firstly
, since day one,the young ones are surrounded and closely observed by their family. During
this
 period, by using parenting knowledge, they can be taught morals and values of the society and how to respect their elders.
For example
, by telling stories parents can teach what is good and bad.
This
 can have huge positive changes in their offspring. Alternatively, when kids are not well informed regarding
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ccepted behaviour of society, they may end in doing offences.
Secondly
, due to either peer pressure or social media influence, children can be manipulated and engage
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in some
 unlawful acts.
However
, good parents would easily understand
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 changes and often take corrective measures to bring them back. Apart from
this
, sometimes they require assistance from an
xpert
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 to handle tensions and worries. Until no circumstances, children share their secrets with strangers,
this
 should only discuss with trusted family members. For
this
, parental skills play an active role to handle
such
 issues effectively. In conclusion, it is commonly believed that skilled parents can reduce
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rime rate among children. I support
this
 statement because it has been proven in many potential cases.
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