Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Hello, I was a passenger of your Lufthansa flight numbered LU3782 which routed from London to Vancouver on 16th September 2020. My boarding pass id was XE4568,
unfortunately
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I forgot my
bag
in the aeroplane
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while alighting
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Vancouver. I had kept it in the cabinet above 6A, which was
also
my seat. It was a red coloured travel
bag
, one out the 4 wheels at the bottom of the
bag
is broken. It had a hard outer cover and bares a making label of SkyBags. It
also
has a saffron scarf tied to the top handle of the
bag
. The
bag
contains a set of clothes, a MacBook along with its charger, travel utility kit, and a book named The Kite Runner. The description should allow you to identify the
bag
, and the contents could act as verification of my ownership. I hope you could locate the
bag
at the earliest, as I am in dire need of my laptop.
Also
,I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused due to my negligence and would like to thank you for your co-operation in advance. Thanks and regards,
Khaleed
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Khaled
Hosseini
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