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Duties of community support worker. do you agree or disagree

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As a Community support worker, I help them in achieving tasks of daily activities
such
 as
remind
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 them about personal hygiene, medications, exercises or any recreational activities they do on
daily
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a daily
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 basis.
In addition
, set a reminder or mark in
calendar
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the calendar
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 about any future medical appointments.
Clients
 prefer to learn new skills or utilize their spare time to do something productive like cooking, guitar lessons, and gardening. Meanwhile, I help them as a guide to show steps followed to achieve them.
Moreover
, transportation booking of
clients
done
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 by myself.  In case
If
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apply
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client
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the client
a client
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 is unable to do chores for themselves
then
 I do light housekeeping or laundry.
However
, I monitor
clients
while
 doing everyday
task
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tasks
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 afterwards I
wrote
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write
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a report
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report
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reports
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 on their
behavior
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behaviour
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and note any significant change in their
behavior
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. Daily documentation is done on
eating
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the eating
an eating
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pattern
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patterns
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, medicine administration and appointment
schedule
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schedules
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 of
clients
. Any deviation in
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the behavior
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behavior
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behaviour
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 of
client
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the client
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 is notified and
specific
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 implemented to resolve the issue.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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