Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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money has been spent on space exploration. It is sometimes thought
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is wasting our money by looking
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while others think
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initiative would bring some benefits to mankind. In my opinion , I firmly believe that
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spending could bring a positive change to us. On the one hand, supporters of funding to search outer space living things point out that
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would give us an insight into a lot of knowledge and resources. In
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, presently, humans are facing a
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arth, due to,our own misbehaves.
Therefore
, if finding a new civilisation, can aid us to move off from the planet earth.
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, in the view of
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perception, NASA has launched a mission to get
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information from space. Eventually,his knowledge would be benefited in many terms. And I
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all walks of life. On other hand, opponents of the above - mentioned argument think that
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mission cannot be fruitful as we have not yet to develop a feasible medium to communicate with most of the organisms in the earth.
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interstellar probe
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to another galaxy could contaminate that planet or it can infect
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our planet on its return. For example, there are
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theory are formulated regarding the possible dangers of
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by scientists. Alternatively, since
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huge funding, it is argued that can be channelised to upgrade the status
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poor people. In conclusion, people have a different concept regarding whether communicating with
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upport
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while others think that it can be harmful. In my opinion,
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can be helpful as we could find another home.
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