some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the host nation. Others believe that thesze events are mainly large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that many countries are ready to organise mega sports events.
However
, it is sometimes thought
this
may not be profitable in terms of money, others, consider that
this
can bring plenty of chances to develop even
further
financialy
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financially
financial
. In my opinion, I think that
this
can offer
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positive energy to
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ost country.
Firstly
, one of the main reasons why I think
this
is a golden chance to showcase the country's resources in front of other nations. During
this
function, there are a lot of
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preparations
preparation
have to be made by the organiser to accommodate both sports stars as well as viewers.
This
can be done by making state - of -art- buildings and arenas, which can
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also
attract thousands of tourists globally.
For example
. Rio
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, which was witnessed the same scenario and even now they have been a hot spot of many holidaymakers.
This
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happened
since Brazil staged the mega event for the world.
Secondly
, When foreign investors are allured by the facilities of the host nation, they would think about investing in the country for their business. By doing
this
, they probably start some factories to make products, which, eventually, creates
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umber of jobs for local people.
This
situation, slowly,makes a strong economy and they can
flurish
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flourish
as well.
For instance
, a recent study showed that whatever nations who hosted the
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meets, later on, they experienced
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significant advancement in receiving foreign investments. In conclusion, people have a different opinion on events
such
as
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and world football, since
this
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uge financial burden to them. Despite the fact that
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I strongly hold a view of
this
can bring more positives than any negatives.
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